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PostSubject: Sentai Hyuuga   Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:29 pm

Sentai woke up,and went to the Living Room to watch television.His breakfast was on the table so he went to the table to eat his breakfast.He had eggs & cheese w/ sausage and bacon on the side with a glass of milk.He huged his mom before he left home,so he went out the door running to the academy so he wont be late.Then, after school he went to the forest to train his Byakugan.Then he practiced on his Rotation,8 Trigrams 64 Palms and his Gentle Fist and said "Alright! I can't wait to tell mom and dad how i mproved in fighting."
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PostSubject: Re: Sentai Hyuuga   Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:32 pm

Kinda short but with good detail and no grammar or spelling errors. I will give this a C, this lets you make any ninja up to the rank of Chunin.

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