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Renjiro Hyuuga


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Join date : 2008-07-21
Age : 30
Location : England, UK

PostSubject: renjiro hyuuga   Tue Jul 22, 2008 6:06 pm

Renjiro woke up one morning, feeling drowsy. He got out of bed and pulled out a bowl, a thingy and a glass. He got a box of cereal and poured some into the bowl, then poured some milk into the bowl. He got some orange juice out of his refrigerator and poured some into his glass. After breakfast, Renjiro was enthusiastic and ready to train. He set off to the Academy, feeling refreshed and ready for learning. After school, Renjiro decided to wander off to the forest. He tried using his 'Hakke Rokujuu Yanshou' on a tree stump, and the stump broke in half. 'I...I have... I've gotten stronger!' Renjiro thought proudly, continuing his training.
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PostSubject: Re: renjiro hyuuga   Tue Jul 22, 2008 6:11 pm

I'll give this a B. It has decant detail and you never control another character. There are no spelling or grammar errors either. So you can create characters up to the Jounin or ANBU level.


Ryoushi Hanshou. Hokage and medical specialist.
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