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PostSubject: Kayn Korak   Fri Jul 18, 2008 5:47 pm

Name:Korak, Kayn

Age:14

Gender:Male

Village:Leaf

Ninja Rank: Tsuchikage earth village

Clan:Korak, there is no kekke genkkai in this clan. Started in the leaf village and broke when Kayn's father Jerec became a rouge ninja. The clan stayed in alliance with the leaf village until they were wiped out fighting the nine-tailed fox. Kayn is the only clan member left, his goal is to restore his clan and proove his worth. The jutsus they are well known for are the jutsus that involve their carefully made staff. At the age of three thay began training with a staff.

Only survivor

Looks:5'6", 125lbs, long blonde hair, green eyes, light build with red and black armor from the waist up to the neck. Also underarmor beneath the main armor. Has a kunai scar on his forehead under his hair. Light skin.

Personality: Generaly friendly, whether allies or enimies. Very observant but when focused on something tunes out all else. Lost his mother when he was nine due to battle wounds from Anbu Black Ops.

Special Characteristics: Can summon hounds to his aid. Can use his staff in special justus made by the Korak clan. Has an IQ of 250. Very observant but bad at multi-tasking.

Elements:Water and Fire

Skills/Specialties: Ninjutsu and weoponry (long wooden staff)


Jutsus:

water style-Violent Water Wave
rank-D
type-Ninjutsu
The appropriate handsigns create a large tidal wave at their opponents using water style.

Escaping skill
rank-E
type-Ninjutsu
used to get out of bindings or ropes as well as cuffs.

String reeling
rank-E
type-Taijutsu
immobilizing enemy's with string wrapped around their bodies, also capable of laying traps.


Giant Waterfall
Rank: A
Type:Ninjutsu
creates a giant mountain of water and crashes on enemy's.

Great Fireball
Rank:-A
Type: Ninjutsu
creates a giant fire ball and shoots it through the mouth at opponents.

Flying Thunder God
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu


Multi-Shadow Clone Jutsu
Rank: A
Type:Ninjutsu
creates many shadow clones in one jutsu.

Combonation Transformation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
transform with an object or person together.


Spiritualism (Summoning) Ninja Hounds
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
summons ninja hounds to track and attack enemy's using the enemy's blood.

Crescent Moon Dance (staff version)
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Creates clones to confuse enemy and attacks with a staff from above.

Shape changing
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu

Shuriken shadow clone
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
creates shuriken shadow clones from at least one shuriken or kunai.

Art of the Water Prison
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
captures enemy's in an unbreakable water prison, must keep arm in the prison to hold it together.

Tracking Fang Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Uses summoning to track then take down opponents from far distances.

Black Clouds Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Uses fire style to light sprayed oil.

Staff water blast
rank-D:style-attack and defence
type-Ninjutsu
sprays a strong blast of water out an end.

Staff fire blast
rank-D:type-attack
type-Ninjutsu
Shoots small fireballs out the end.

Flare whip
rank D
type-Ninjutsu
staff increases size and inflames.

Summons:Hounds
1:tatsu-leader,Grey-Can tell when to quit with a large expance of integrity too.
2:Tulio-second in command,Brown, likes to play around but is serious in battle.
3:light star-Attack specialist,White, has the best vision during the night.
4:discover-Main tracker,Black, has the best sence of smell.
5:pen-Tracker,Black-the youngest and most eager of the group, smaller.
6:amaru-Tracker-Black,Older with more experience and insight.
7:hanari-Battle Planner,Black with 2 white stripes has a coller that stores scrolls and maps.
8:marriot-Ambush protector, Silver, Huge dog that stays back in case of an ambush.



History/Background Story: Kayn Korak grew up in the land of fire with his mother and father. When he was six his father began teaching him jutsu from the leaf village. He later realized his father was a rouge ninja. He was nine when the Anbu Black Ops discovered his whereabouts; they came for him. His father was captured and his mother killed in the attack. He hid away in a secret cave in the mountainside his father told him about. He watched his dad be taken away, his family gone. After the attack he vowed to make his father proud, he developed his own jutsu. When he thought he was ready at the age of eleven. He traveled to the hidden leaf village. There he became a academy student. Waiting for a chance to proove his skills. To start his clan...



ROLE PLAY SAMPLE: *nudge* *nudge* "kayn wake up." Kayn's father Jerec always woke him up at six in the morning to practice jutsu. "Aw c'mon dad, cant we just start late today?". Jerec replied " if you want to be the best, you must train whenever possible." So, just as every day Kayn got up and went outside to warm up with staff sparring practice.

This was the one part of training he could defeat his father. The staff was the Korak clans speciality. Especially sparring, this was where kayn shined. Jerec came at him with a horozontal strike. Kayn easily parried and counter attacked with a blow to the legs. He may be able to beat his dad, but Jerec wasn't stupid. Jerec jumped over the strike and came down on Kayn.

Kayn wasn't ready for it, he tried to parry but Jerec rolled left and struck his side. Kayn couldnt believe he let his guard down. But he was about to try and make up for it with a move he recently learned. He started making handsigns. Jerec was confused, he had no idea his son had learned a jutsu.

"Teleportation!" Kayn was teleported behind his father and struck him in the back of the legs, then the head. He had won, but he had a bruise to remind him of his mistakes. "Well well well, youve mastered a jutsu that you created. Impressive" and with that they walked to the next lesson. The summoning of his favorite animal, hounds.

Kayn hadnt yet perfected this jutsu, so when he summoned it a puppy appeared. But, he was close. Closer to surpassing his father. Closer to his destiny...Just a little more and he had it.


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PostSubject: Re: Kayn Korak   Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:14 pm

You have to explain all your jutsu in this format.

Name:
Rank:
Type: ( ninjutsu, taijutsu, genjutsu)

Effect:

Also you have to describe all your summons. Your also supposed to wait for your test to be approved before making a character, but when it does get approved, just change the rank to the one your allowed and ill take a look at it. As for the Tsuchikage, your going to have to talk to Ryo about that. Oh and you forgot your background information.
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PostSubject: Re: Kayn Korak   Fri Jul 18, 2008 7:06 pm

it says background story on there. second i have my summon descriptions on there and last why wont my jutsu work? What i have is more descriptive thasn what im supposed to do?
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PostSubject: Re: Kayn Korak   Fri Jul 18, 2008 7:53 pm

By describing your summons i mean what are each of their abilities, their looks, stuff like that. Your jutsu need more description. Let me show you example.

Fire Style: Phoenix Flower
c-rank
ninjutsu

The user exhales mutiple balls of fire towards the opponent. The Balls of fire are also cabable of hiding shuriken as secondary attack.

You need to DESCRIBE!
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PostSubject: Re: Kayn Korak   Fri Jul 18, 2008 8:28 pm

there done.
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PostSubject: Re: Kayn Korak   Fri Jul 18, 2008 8:33 pm

ok you have to wait for your test to be approved before your char can be approved. ^_^ i dont do tests.
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PostSubject: Re: Kayn Korak   Fri Jul 18, 2008 8:35 pm

lol, well i was tsuchikage on the last one so ill probably do allright. lol
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PostSubject: Re: Kayn Korak   Sun Jul 20, 2008 11:14 pm

clone
rank-E
type-Ninjutsu
Used to confuse the enemy, illusions.

Escaping skill
rank-E
type-Ninjutsu
used to get out of bindings or ropes.

String reeling
rank-E
type-Taijutsu
immobilized with string.

those justu are listed twice so you might want to take care of that. also, you need to check the grade for your RP sample test and edit your ninja rank accordingly.

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