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PostSubject: Mazuki's Test   Tue Aug 26, 2008 4:18 am

Mazuki walked along the side of the road. he turned off in to the froest he was walking next to. He was walking towards a loud sound and when he came to it he saw a huge waterfall. He started to walk on the water all the way till he was being hit by the water from the waterfall. He did a string of hand seals and the part of the waterfall opened and mazuki walked in and the doorway shut. Ten touches around the room lit and mazuki could then see he went over to a bed and layed down and fell asleep. He suddenly awoke and got up and walked to were he came in at and did the same seals and the door way opened again. He stepped out and walked out on to the water. Right when his back foot hit the water a woman came out of the water naked."What the $#%!! Look away!" she said and right then mazuki looked away"im so sorry. I didn't scene you here" mazuki looked over his should and saw the woman get out and grabbed a towel. Mazuki flash stepped in front of the woman"My name mazuki and I'm just going to let you know i didn't see anything" The girl tried to look into mazukis eyes"Are u sure you didn't see anything?"mazuki saw her trying to look into his eyes so he shifted his hair and said"Yes i didn't see anything" mazuki smiled at the girl and the girl stood and looked at his eyes"I love those eyes" mazuki stopped smiling and asked "So why are you out here all alone?" The girl walked around a tree and said"Stay there im changing and im out here because i found that this lake has some of the most pure water and it feels good to swim in and why are u out here?" Mazuki sat down and said"On the other side of the waterfall there is a doorway that only i can open. Its my house" The girl came back from the other side of the tree fully clothed and said" Why do you live in a cliff?" Mazuki got up." It's because I'm a wanted man" said mazuki. He stood in front of her and the sun started to set."I'll be here tomorrow if you want to talk again" Just after she said that she kissed mazuki on the cheek and walked away. Mazuki walked back over to the waterfall and did a string of hand seals and opened the doorway again and went back to sleep.

The next day, before the sun rose, mazuki was already sitting on the water outside his house meditating. He sat so still that the only thing that seemed to move was the wind around him. As the sun rose into the dark sky he scenced a new presence aprouching the lake. He continued to sit and meditate on the water and when he felt the person come out of the forest he ask in a soft voice"What is your name?" Mazuki sat there and waited for an answer. When he didn't hear one he opened his eyes to see the girl from yesterday sitting on the ground admiring mazuki from the edge of the lake. Mazuki got up and walked over to her and right when mazuki did that a pair of hunter ninja came out from two different trees. Mazuki was shocked that he didn't scence them. Mazuki did a backflip before the hunter ninja could get to him. Mazuki used kage bunshin no jutsu and made two shadow clones to preoccupy the hunter ninja that were now in front of him. The hunter ninja on the left wore a mask that had a long red beek and the one on the right wore a mask that had a long blue beek. While the clones preoccupied the hunters mazuki ran over to the girl he met yesterday and ask"Why did you tell them i was here?" The girl looked at mazuki and said"Your a wanted man and I only did the right thing." As she said that a tear dropped from her face and mazuki went in and kissed her and it was as if time had stopped for a second then mazuki jumped away. He passed the hunter ninja that were just destroying the shadow clones. Mazuki jumped up the waterfall and moved as fast as he could. the hunter ninja followed mazuki. Mazuki dropped multiple paper bombs and as the hunter ninja came close to them they detonated in front of them and stopped them letting mazuki escape.
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PostSubject: Re: Mazuki's Test   Tue Aug 26, 2008 4:57 pm

Is this a Naruto test, or a Bleach test? Either way I give this an A. (their were some minor spelling mistakes and you had some spacing problems, but the length was awesome.) With an A you can make Med-Nin, Missing-Nin, ANBU, Jounin, Tokubetsu Jounin, Chuunin, Genin, or Academy Student.

(And if this is a Bleach RP test)

With an A you can make an Arrancar at the Números or Fracción levels, Lieutenant rank or Hollows up to Adjuchas level, basic Soul reapers (ones that don't know the name of thei zanpaktous) and Hollows, and Humans both combatant or non-combatant.
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PostSubject: Re: Mazuki's Test   Tue Aug 26, 2008 7:58 pm

I'm sorry mange but I have to disagree. My grade is a C.

You control another character threw out the entire test as well as two extra at the end (The Hunter nins and the girl.) That along with your grammar and spelling errors is why I am giving this a C. Please check to see what rank character you are permitted before creating your character.

If you wish you may retake the test one time. Then you can use the higher of the two grades and create your character based on that grade.

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PostSubject: Re: Mazuki's Test   Tue Aug 26, 2008 8:28 pm

im going bleach and Sad
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