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PostSubject: Kinzoku Jin   Fri Aug 15, 2008 4:49 pm

Name: Kinzoku Jin

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Village: Former Sand

Ninja rank: Missing Nin (Jounin) (Akatsuki hopeful)

Clan name: Kinzoku

Clan History: The Kinzoku clan history, is an ancient story. It dates back to over 500 years. It all started with the 3rd kazekage of the Sand village. After realizing that he could use his chakra to create a magnetic field in order to manipulate tiny pieces of iron. It is said that after seeing a previous Shukaku host manipulate sand. He surmised that he could do the same with his chakra. It essentially created, what is now known has Satetsu (Iron sand). He could manipulate the sand in any fashion he wished through the magnetic field. Throughout the pass two centuries, the ancestors of the 3rd kazekage. Have been trying to find out the secrets to this technique. It wasn’t so long ago that they found out this elusive secret. They were finally able to create the magnetic field. Which resulted in the use of the Satetsu technique.

And so throughout the past couple of centuries, they have been working to perfect the use of the Satetsu technique. There were able to create a couple of other techniques, to suit there purpose. One could say it is a revival of a great clan. Or the emergence of a great clan.



Physical Appearance: Jin stands at 6ft 3 with long white spiky hair. He wears an headband, with a couple of tattoos on his face. He also have a couple of tattos on his arms, back and chest. His clothing his similar to Gaara’s uniform as the kazekage. He wears a pair of gloves and carries a sword across his back. He also carries the heavens cursed mark on his right shoulder. He also carries a couple of scrolls, that is said to contain his human puppets.

Personality: Kinzoku Jin is a very reserved person. He is also clam and collected and quite witty if the situation calls for it. He doesn’t like to engage in pointless chitchat with others. He is very confident but not cocky. He can be serious sometimes, but also knows when to have a little fun outside of battle.



Special Characteristics: Satetsu-iron sand. And the heavens curse seal.

Elements: Earth, Fire

Skills/Specialities: Ninjutsu, Puppet master (Human puppets)

Character History: Although his clan members are known for their use of the Iron sand technique. Jin took a liking into the art of puppet making. He came across a couple of secrets that revealed to him. The art of turning humans into puppets. After learning these secrets, he decided to use it to his advantage. While on his travels he came across of couple of incredible ninjas. But there were two that caught his eyes as he fought against them. These two warriors were know as Meimu and Rikki. Meimu was a genjutsu master and Rikki used the water element. After two long and difficult battles, Jin was able to overcome his opponents. And with his new found ambition, they ended up as part of his collection.

After Jin was framed in an elaborate plan. He was deemed guilty of high treason. Sensing that his life was in danger, he decided to run away from the Wind country. In which he started living his life as a missing nin. On his travels he was faced with many hardships. Until one day he met a stranger, who said he could grant him salvation. The stranger made a deal with Jin and he accepted. But what caught Jin attention about the deal with stranger. Is the fact that he promised him power.

The stranger claimed to know of an ancient secret that could grant Jin incredible power. After hearing about this supposedly incredible power. Jin agreed and underwent an experiment, a procedure of some sort. The man then infused a genetic enzyme into Jin’s body. The man then explained that he performed a procedure. Enabling Jin to pull out great amount of chakra, through the use of what is called the heavens cursed seal. Jin then spent sometime with the stranger, learning more about the curse seal. Until he was able to reach level two and have mastery over the curse. Allowing him to transform a certain body part at will, without the use of a full transformation.

It was not long after that the stranger demanded to know the secrets of the Iron sand technique. But sensing the dangers of these secrets. Jin decided to flee, it seems his decision making came from his loyalty to his clan. And so he went on the road as a rogue ninja again.

(I will post my Jutsus in a minute)


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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku Jin   Fri Aug 15, 2008 6:05 pm

Satetsu - Iron Sand

Rank: -
Range: -
Type: Supplementary

Satetsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Sandaime Kazekage. It was this most feared jutsu in Hidden Sand which granted Sandaime the honor of being called the strongest Kazekage yet. This jutsu was developed by Sandaime after seeing a previous Shukaku host do something similar. The sand is emited from the mouth and Sandaime can form it into any weapon he needs. Sandaime could do this because his body held special traits which allowed him to change his chakra into a magnetic field.

Satetsu Kaihou - Iron Sand World Method

Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack

Satetsu Kaihou is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Sandaime Kazekage. Using a massive amount of iron sand, the user will cause a huge 3D lattice work of spikes to form, piercing most anything in its path. If one gets scratched by the poisoned sand spikes, the individual's body goes numb almost instantly and stops moving. Within three days the individual will die unless an antidote is administered.

Satetsu Shigure - Iron Sand Autumnal Showers

Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack

Satetsu Shigure is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Sandaime Kazekage. Using his body's special ability to change his chakra into a magnetic field, Sandaime Kazekage could form the sand into small piercing clumps which could rain down on his opponent. Because of the deadliness of the attack, a ninja must do all they can to avoid it, rather than make any attempt to block it.

Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique (Advanced version)

Rank: D-A (Depending on its usage)
Range: -
Type: Supplementary

Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance. However Jin have developed the body flicker jutsu, allowing him to move at incredible speed. To either attack or escape his opponents.

Kuchiyose no jutsu (Summoning technique)

Classification: Animal Summoing (Lizards)
Character Affiliation: Kinzoku Jin

Hitokugutsu - Human Puppet (human puppets)

Rank- A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Supplementary

First puppet: Meimu is a human puppet, that uses genjutsu. Meimu is also able to use Genjutsu through the use of sound, among other means.

2nd puppets: Rikki is also a human puppet, but he uses the water element. Prior to his battle with Jin, Rikki was an expert at water techniques.

Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique

Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Supplementary

Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

Satetsu-Tengai ( Metal dome)

Rank-B
Range-close (0~5m)
Type- Defense

Utilizing the iron sand, the user will form a set of hand seals. A metal dome will then form, protecting the user from harm. The metal dome is very solid and also spread under the foot of the user. With the intention of stopping incoming attacks from underground.

Satetsu -Kasui (metal spikes)

Rank-B
Range- close/mid (0~5m) (5~10m) (10m+)
Type- Supplementary

Utilizing the Iron sand. the user will perform a set of hand seals. It will then cause sharp metal spikes to shoot up from the ground at incredible speed. The Spikes will come up from the ground in a vertical position. Or in a slanted fashion, depending on the users will. The sharp spikes will appear to deal a deadly blow to the opponent (s).

Doryuudan - Earth Dragon Projectile

Rank: Unknown
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack

Doton • Doryuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and create a dragon from the river of mud made after using the Doryuu Taiga technique. This dragon will then spew mud projectiles from its mouth.

Doryuu Heki - Earth Style Wall

Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Defense

Doton • Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.

Yomi Numa - Swamp of the Underworld

Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack

Doton • Yomi Numa is a Ninjutsu technique used by the Sannin Jiraiya utilizing the Earth element. After forming the needed handseals, a vast swamp can appear beneath his target to sink and kill it.


Karyuu Endan - Fire Dragon Flame Projectile

Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack

Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.

Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique

Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack

Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique

Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack

Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.


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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku Jin   Fri Aug 15, 2008 10:04 pm

You have WAY to many jutsu for an jounin/anbu....the limit is 15 I believe
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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku Jin   Sat Aug 16, 2008 10:58 am

i no its not my place V but it says that she can have 15 of each element.....


Jutsu (list the jutsu your character knows above D-Rank jutsu.)[genin can use 10 jutsu of their element. Chunin and higher can use 15 jutsu of each element they have. Kage and Sannin can use 25 jutsu of their elements.]

i copied it... just trying to be help full dont HATE me...V.V
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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku Jin   Mon Aug 18, 2008 3:57 am

Not to be a dick haru, but READ THE WHOLE TEMPLATE!!

Jounin Rank or higher can combine their elements but each jutsu of combined elements counts towards 1 jutsu for both elements. All non-elemental jutsu count as one of each of your elements as well with exception to the starting 6 jutsu

He didnt mix any elements.......

....and Metal doesn't count as an element...the 5 elements are: Lightning, Earth, Fire, Water, and Wind. Metal would be the balance of Lightning and Earth, you could have a metal release.... (example: earth+water=Mokuton [wood release])
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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku Jin   Mon Aug 18, 2008 9:13 am

I edited it.
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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku Jin   Mon Aug 18, 2008 11:20 pm

Okay, You can't exactly have iron sand, or anything close to that due to the special characteristic of the Sandaime Kazekage, So remove that...

Anything else than that, it looks fine, just take out the "Other Character" type wordings in the Jutsu, Okay?

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku Jin   Mon Aug 18, 2008 11:41 pm

Kay, i guess approved...

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku Jin   Tue Aug 19, 2008 1:44 am

Um, no tosh. Ryo said only he and I are allowed to approve characters currently.....I believe he said this in S.Laughter's Test or char..I dont remember it was one of the two....and Victory21, what did you edit?
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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku Jin   Wed Aug 20, 2008 3:45 am

this character hasn't been approved, plus you need to have Lightning and Earth for Iron Sand.
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