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haru

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PostSubject: haur suzki   Sat Jul 26, 2008 8:52 pm

haru looked around as she walked along the streets of the leaf village. "what to do...what to do?" she muddered to herself, as she wounder aimlessly around. " i know!" she said snapping her fingers together. haru tore off looking around as she dashed back into the house grabbed a small black bound book and ran out. "i'll capture the stances of ninja" she said as she took her palce in the trees and begun drawing ninja as they trained.
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Mange
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Location : Kokuei is training...thats why I havent posted in the RP as him. So yea.

PostSubject: Re: haur suzki   Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:10 pm

I say this deserves a D. It's to short with not much detail and you have some spelling and grammar mistakes. You can create Academy Students or Genin.
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PostSubject: Re: haur suzki   Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:19 pm

2nd spelling and grammer so D. I am MOD hereby give you a D and therefore you can create either a Academy student or genin character
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PostSubject: Re: haur suzki   Mon Jul 28, 2008 10:21 am

Ren you dumbass Mange already said that
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PostSubject: Re: haur suzki   Mon Jul 28, 2008 2:31 pm

Seriously

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Location : Kokuei is training...thats why I havent posted in the RP as him. So yea.

PostSubject: Re: haur suzki   Wed Jul 30, 2008 3:55 pm

Renjiro Hyuuga wrote:
2nd spelling and grammer so D. I am MOD hereby give you a D and therefore you can create either a Academy student or genin character

Yea and Im an ADMIN
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